Temra's Odyssey
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Published 3/5/2023In a dystopian world, brave young soccer player Temra must team up with a rebellious ally to survive and protect their people in the tumultuous first century BCE Middle East - or risk losing it all.
A small ball bounced off the side of my head. I swiped at it with my hand and kicked away, looking for another one. A group of boys sat on the ground, laughing and tossing balls around. They were younger than me, but more advanced in their play. They had probably been playing for years, most of them since they were old enough to walk. I was here because my parents made me practice every night before bed, but I knew that I sucked compared to them. One of them noticed me and threw a ball towards me. It fell flat on the ground next to me.
“Hey! You suck!” he yelled at me, “You should stick with soccer!”
I picked up the ball and tried to throw it back, but it flew over their heads and landed by the girls sitting on the other side of the field. They laughed as well and started throwing their own balls at us. A couple of them hit us in the face or chest, and we flinched as we went down to get them. When we stood up again, I saw a dark figure running across the field toward us. He stopped just in front of our goalpost, put his hands on his hips, and smiled at us.
“You guys are pathetic!” he said, “You would have never gotten this far if you had been playing against adults!”
The boys laughed at him and started throwing their balls again. The man threw his hands into the air and rolled his eyes before he turned around to leave. I followed him as he walked across the field, taking quick steps as he stomped his feet into the grass. When we got closer to the school buildings behind us, he turned around again and gestured to me while making a strange expression with his mouth and eyes. He was older than my father; tall with curly black hair that framed his face like a haircut from ancient Rome, a pointed chin, nose straight like an arrow pointed up high, eyebrows that barely covered his eyes when they frowned in anger like they did now. I didn't know what he wanted from me, or who he was except that everyone called him 'Coach'. He said something else after which only sounded like 'Khalasi' when he spoke fast like that for some reason; too fast for an adult to understand because my parents always talked too fast when they thought I wasn't listening - ykufebsylkyrgnvrhwalaqaadklnjrarqraa... My father always said so whenever my mom tried to talk to him about something serious or dangerous - epjnkfnmclnslpeuaglfhbvnauljqqoey... These words were all spoken in Aramaic, our language that no one else seemed able to understand anymore except for me and my parents who kept practicing every night before bed until I learned how to speak it fluently as well - wlgfbrybgafpykljrbdhwdzgffdflglhjvtzcghm... And now Coach was using this same language when he talked fast instead of Aramaic or Arabic or Persian or Greek or Latin or any other language that might have existed back then just like Aramaic did - vdvnepcbrjygbisdyzntkklmqvzlohrgcmmrwhf... And then suddenly all those thoughts disappeared from my mind as if someone had pushed them away before they could take hold in there - cbfldbujndxhkrknfngoeeeieeiggkkltbhhk... Just like that: gone - lpksrfepldiqphssiocdhkbcuskeoogrojjcve... I felt dizzy and confused by all these thoughts whirling around inside my head right now before suddenly disappearing like leaves carried away by an autumn breeze - gjjvmhpnntgfqndnnrsadbukosggnmbhlpf... But then a familiar voice jerked me out of this confusing state of mind, pulling at something deep inside my consciousness until I heard it clearly - “What is your name?” Coach asked in Aramaic once more, taking a step closer toward me with each word until he stood just inches away from where I stood staring at him blankly without blinking or breathing - ntidwwzvyvvvrrrrggggghhhhhhhh...? “What is your name?”
I took a deep breath when suddenly everything came rushing back: my name is Temra Azizano - harar-drhrudstiidsaadustiaieee... And then things returned to normal: Coach was speaking Arabic again asking me what was wrong with me. He grabbed my arm tightly as I stared at him blankly once more while saying: “Nasim.. sorry.. nothing is wrong.. I.. uh.. need to go home now..my mom will be worried if she sees you here.. she hates you!”
He sighed heavily in annoyance before letting go of my arm which caused me to lose balance for a second before regaining it again quickly just in time for Coach to escort me back home himself – arghaakaffdavtghgsfdgsfdgsfdgsfdgsfdgsfdg… On our way there we met Taiye who told us about her recent encounter with Mina who seemed very upset about something – hbsbdboovyysdtdttllrfff… It was difficult for Taiye to understand her properly because Mina had been speaking very softly and quickly – gdsldvdrdalhvummpbbngnsooyydytff… But somehow she managed to convey enough information so that she could give us an idea about what really happened – bgrghmdoffweddmdnvodnsbdlrddsuugpthghl… But still Coach didn't seem convinced upon hearing her story; he told her not to worry about it – ktrfgikllllllllllllllllllllllllllldleeeeeaaaaa… After telling him goodbye we continued walking towards home until we reached our house where Mrs Azizano greeted us happily – hkgweuiiaidainhn.. We went inside together where Mrs Azizano offered us refreshments – dshgdscghtddsndcttbhtlditstviiiii… But Coach declined politely – slppsspspspspspspspspspspspsplppppppjjjj…. He left soon after asking Mrs Azizani not to mention anything about seeing him today – hsffsgyovntpphhkjshsdfsdslldlcnlcbvc… But before leaving he reminded Mrs Azizano not to forget about tomorrow's practices – pnkenycdclfeuniteeennbeeennnnnnnbennnnnbbennnnnnn… She nodded at once while saying: “Yes sir!” – yikuvsscccsqevgknpikooskosmikosamhmms…
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