Whispered Vows: A Forbidden Love in Abuna

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Published 7/3/2023
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"You can't love him."

"But I do," Elysse cried. She was kneeling next to her bed, looking up at her father with a tear-streaked face. "I've tried everything, but there's nothing I can do. I love him."

"Love?" she father scoffed. "You think you know what love is? Love is obedience, respect, and honor. You are my child and you will always be my child. You may have fallen for this man's lies, but as your father I will help you see the truth. This man is no good for you."

Elysse looked down at the floor of her bedroom and tried to hold back her tears. Her mother walked over to her and put a hand on her shoulder.

"We just want what's best for you, dear," her mother said softly. "We know that Raza has been helping people in the city. We know that he cares deeply about others. But we also know that his heart is dark and dangerous. He doesn't care about family or tradition or god himself."

"He does care," Elysse insisted, finally looking back up at her parents through her wet eyes. "He does care about all those things."

Her father shook his head firmly and sat down next to his daughter on the floor of Elysse's room. He took her hands in his own and looked into her eyes firmly.

"Listen to me, Elysse," he continued softly. "There are some men who have darkness that cannot be explained by anything other than evil itself. That boy is one of them."

Elysse felt tears streaming down her cheeks now, threatening to drown out the sound of her father's voice as he continued talking:

"Raza's father was a man like this too, wasn't he? A man who was not there for his wife or children? A man who went drinking with his friends every night?" Elysse nodded hesitantly at this point, but it didn't matter anyway because her father didn't let up:

"And look how many years ago did he leave? Do you remember his name? Of course not! You were too young to even understand what happened when he left us!"

Elysse wanted to speak up at this point, but she couldn't find the words - she didn't want to argue with her father, so instead she just sat there quietly while he continued telling her what he thought she should know:

"That boy is just like his father," he continued. "There is no way he could possibly care about family if he leaves his own child in the streets for their entire life without so much as an explanation!"

Elysse surprised herself when she finally spoke up: "Then why has he been trying so hard to protect me from the same thing happening to me?" she asked quietly, finally lifting up her head again to meet her father's gaze directly in the eye. "Why else would he be so adamant about helping others if not because they're family?"

Her father only sighed at this point and looked away from Elysse before making a loud exhalation of breath through his nose:

"Do you know how much work it takes for a single person to survive out there with nothing more than a knife and a bow?" He turned back towards Elysse and locked eyes with her again as he continued: "Do you think we got here on our own accord? We had help from others who were willing to sacrifice themselves to protect us under God's law! And now look where we are! Look at all the great things we have in this city all because people were willing to put their lives on the line for us!"

Elysse tried desperately not to let any more tears fall from her eyes as she stared down at the floor again in silence - however it was apparent by the tone of voice that she had lost this argument:

"Please don't cry any more," said Elysse's mother gently as she kneeled close next to Elysse on the ground next to where she sat on her bed. "I'm sure once you think about what your father said, you'll realize that staying with Raza isn't worth it." She paused before adding softly: "I'm sure that after thinking about what happened when your grandfather left us behind because of alcohol - well then maybe it won't seem so bad anymore." She reached out slowly towards Elysse and placed a hand on top of hers before continuing slowly: "And besides... darling... I'm sure there are other boys out there who would love nothing more than to take care of you." She forced a smile across face as she finished up before getting up slowly off the floor with a heavy sigh before leaving Elysse alone in her room with only her thoughts as company.

As the door closed behind her mother, Elysse finally let the floodgates of her emotions burst open. Tears streamed down her cheeks, her body convulsed with sobs. She felt as though her heart was breaking into a thousand jagged pieces, each fragment piercing her with a pain she had never known before. In that moment, she couldn't comprehend how her own parents could be so blind to the love that she and Raza shared.

She cast a longing glance at the small wooden box on her nightstand. It held every precious letter, every stolen moment captured in ink, every whispered hope and dream shared between her and Raza. It was a secret world they had created, a sanctuary where their love could exist away from prying eyes and disapproving glances.

With trembling hands, Elysse opened the box and began to flip through the letters. The words leapt off the delicate pages, washing over her like a balm to her battered heart. Raza's declarations of love, his promises of a future together, they were all there, etched permanently in her mind.

Suddenly, a knock on her door interrupted her thoughts. Elysse hastily closed the box and wiped her tears away, hoping her voice would sound steady when she said, "Come in."

The door creaked open, revealing her younger sister, Mirabelle. The younger girl's eyes were filled with sympathy as she stepped into the room, her demeanor a stark contrast to the stern disapproval of their parents.

"Elysse," Mirabelle said softly, sitting down next to her sister, "I'm sorry for how they treated you. I know what it's like to fight for love when everyone else thinks they know better." She placed a hand on Elysse's shoulder, offering her solace in the form of sisterhood.

Elysse felt a flicker of hope, a glimmer of understanding. Mirabelle, only fourteen years old, had already experienced the challenges of following one's heart against the wishes of their parents. It was a brave act, and it gave Elysse strength.

"Thank you, Mirabelle," Elysse said, her voice quivering but determined, "I don't want to lose Raza. He means the world to me, and I know deep in my heart that he is the right person for me."

Mirabelle squeezed her sister's shoulder, her gaze filled with unwavering support. "Then we need to find a way to convince them, to make them see what we see."

Elysse's tears began to dry, replaced by a fierce determination. She realized she couldn't give up on Raza, not when their love burned so brightly in her soul. Together, she and Mirabelle would find a way to unravel the prejudice that clouded their parents' judgment.

Days turned into weeks as Elysse and Mirabelle meticulously planned their strategy. They relied on small acts of rebellion, subtle moments to showcase Raza's goodness and their love for one another. They held secret meetings in the starlit gardens, where Raza taught Elysse the art of archery, a skill she never knew she possessed. They delivered food and clothing to those less fortunate, proving that Raza's heart was indeed kind and compassionate.

Word began to spread throughout the city, whispers drifting on the breeze of the forbidden love between Elysse and Raza. The people, the very ones Elysse's father claimed to be protecting, held their breath, waiting to see if love could triumph over prejudice.

Finally, the day arrived when Elysse and Mirabelle would confront their parents. It began with a feast, an elaborate affair that Elysse's father had organized to celebrate their heritage and the future they believed Elysse would embrace.

As the family gathered around the table, Elysse grasped Raza's hand tightly under the cloth, finding solace and strength in his touch. She exchanged a quick glance with Mirabelle, who nodded, ready to support her sister in whatever lay ahead.

Elysse took a deep breath and stood up, the room falling silent as eyes turned to her.

"Father, Mother," she began, her voice steady and resolute, "I have listened to your concerns, and I appreciate your love and worry for me. But I have also come to realize that my heart cannot be swayed. Raza is a man of honor, compassion, and love—a man who has shown me a world beyond our own that is filled with hope and possibilities."

Her father's eyes narrowed, but Elysse mustered the courage to continue, her words carrying the strength of her conviction.

"I understand that you fear for me, but would it not be a greater loss to deny love when it is right in front of us? Raza's past does not define him, just as our own experiences do not define us. We, as a family, have the power to break the cycle of pain and embrace the love that is offered to us."

Elysse's mother exchanged a glance with her father, a flicker of uncertainty crossing their faces. Could it be that their daughter's words were reaching them, chipping away at their deep-rooted beliefs?

Raza, who had remained silent until now, spoke with a sincerity that moved the room. "I stand before you with no intention of severing any ties or defying any traditions. I only wish to love and protect Elysse, to build a future together that bridges our worlds."

A heavy silence hung in the air, the weight of the moment palpable. Elysse's heart pounded in her chest, her entire being focused on her parents' next words.

Her father, after what seemed like an eternity, finally broke the silence. "Love cannot be chosen, can it? It merely happens, consuming us until we have no choice but to surrender."

A tear glistened in her mother's eyes as she reached out and took Elysse's trembling hand. "We may not understand it, but we cannot deny what we see before us. If he has truly proven himself worthy of your love, then who are we to stand in its way?"

Relief washed over Elysse, tears streaming down her face, but they were tears of gratitude and triumph. In that powerful moment, love had trumped prejudice, and Elysse realized the strength that resided within her own heart.

The room erupted in applause, the sound of hands clapping and voices cheering filling the air. Elysse looked around, her heart overflowing with joy and the knowledge that true love had prevailed.

As she embraced her parents and felt the warmth of their acceptance, Elysse could see the walls of their old beliefs crumbling, making space for a brighter, more inclusive future. And at the center of it all stood her and Raza, two souls bound by a love that would endure the test of time.



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