Pharaoh's Redemption.

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Published 4/3/2023
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The last stagecoach to the edge of the desert was packed.

Those who had been fortunate enough to secure passage glared at those who hadn't.

The heat was blistering, and the sun was very high in the sky.

It was hard to look anyone in the eye, even for those who were used to looking down on others.

There was a grumbling from the back of the coach, where a man with a tall black hat was sitting.

"Corpse-dragger," someone hissed, "murderer!" The man with the hat didn't seem to hear it.

He tried to lean his head forward so he could see out of a window, but he couldn't reach far enough.

He fidgeted impatiently.

He thought he might try to get off at the next stop, if he could manage it without being noticed.

After what felt like an eternity, they finally arrived at the edge of the desert, and everyone got off the coach except for one man: The man with the tall black hat.

"I've changed my mind," he said, "I'm staying on." The driver looked up from his perch on top of the carriage and said nothing.

The driver took away all their luggage, except for a single suitcase that belonged to one of the passengers - A man with a long white beard and kind blue eyes. He carried his case as if it were precious cargo and hoisted it into the carriage himself.

"Are you sure you want me to take that?" The driver asked. "It looks awfully heavy."

The old man smiled at him and said "I'm sure". Then he sat down opposite a woman with large dark eyes, jet black hair, and skin as smooth as porcelain. She wore a red dress and a tiara made of gold and jewels around her head. The old man bowed deeply before her and she nodded her head slightly in return. Then another man across from them also bowed low before her, almost as low as he could go without lying down on his back; he was so short that he had to kneel in order to do this properly. He was dressed in an orange prison uniform, though he did not wear handcuffs or leg irons; he had been given permission by his jailers to ride in comfort since there were no other seats available for him inside the carriage.

The driver closed the door behind him and went up front again to sit on his perch atop the carriage. He turned around and kicked his horse into motion; it started off slowly at first but then quickened its pace until they were flying over the sands faster than any horse had ever gone before or would ever go again after that day; they passed over sands that stretched endlessly toward every point of the compass until they reached a vast ocean that lay just beyond their sight; they traveled along its shore until they came upon a forest so thick with trees that their branches met overhead forming an impenetrable shelter; they passed through these woods until they reached an oasis where wild roses bloomed everywhere and tranquil pools reflected back images of paradise itself; they continued through those fields until they came upon a palace built entirely out of marble so pure that it seemed almost unreal; it gleamed like snow against an azure sky when sunlight glanced off its surface; its towers soared higher than anything built by man had ever gone before or would go again after that day; there seemed no end to its size or beauty anywhere within sight or imagination.

Within the palace walls were gardens teeming with fruit-bearing trees, lushly growing against walls painted green and accented with mossy splashes of color. Within these gardens, birds sang melodious songs in perfect harmony, filling every corner with their beautiful music without disturbing one another. Marble statues adorned the gardens, expertly crafted down to the finest detail, and crystal-clear lakes housed fish that swam beneath floating lily pads. Koi ponds showcased fish of vibrant colors, including red, blue, purple, golden yellow, chocolate brown, and many shades unknown in the world outside this heavenly realm.

The people who once filled this paradise shed tears of repentance, washing away their past sins and recognizing the folly of their misguided fear and false assumptions about their Creator. Those whose souls were darkened by sin are now being purified through their heartfelt remorse, accepting the divine wisdom that was previously obscured from their understanding due to their reliance on worldly knowledge. With each tear shed, the shame of having strayed so far from the true path and allowing themselves to be swayed by misconceptions gradually diminishes, paving the way to a new beginning guided by divine truth and love.



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