Atelides' Epic Odyssey

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Published 3/19/2023
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The mist shrouded streets of Athens were quiet. Such was the way of the city, especially in the early hours before dawn. The moon had set and by this point only a few taverns dotted here and there remained alight with their flagons, lamps, and heating braziers. The rest shuttered, locked tight for the night, or ransacked and left in shambles.

The shopkeeps and stall owners were just as leery as any. It was a dangerous thing to be awake at such an hour without a good reason. You could find yourself robbed, your shop burnt down, or worse - murdered in your own home or on the street. That was why grandfather had taught me never to delay opening up shop when I was young. He had opened his shop at daybreak every morning for years until he finally passed away. My father continued his legacy after that, but when he too passed I knew it was time for a change. Not everyone can handle the responsibility of running a business on their own, let alone at such odd hours, so I closed up shop for a while to go out into the world and figure some things out.

To my surprise though I found that after my time away from the city it had become more dangerous than ever. Gangs now roamed the streets openly with their knives and axes swinging against anyone who stood in their way. The thieves seemed to have multiplied tenfold and with them came the extortionists threatening you at knife-point for money or your life if you didn’t comply. I had even heard rumors that entire families were being targeted for ransom; houses burnt to the ground with all inside left for dead if they couldn’t afford to pay whatever it was that someone wanted from them.

A chill ran down my spine as I remembered those stories. In one case it had been a family who owned a small farm outside of town that had been terrorized by a gang of raiders demanding tributes from them every month in exchange for keeping the peace. The family simply couldn’t afford it anymore and thus fled to Athens where they could live off of whatever meager earnings they could scrape together between themselves through odd jobs and day labor work once they arrived in town. It wasn’t long before they too were extorted under protection money by other thieves looking to run their own racket on these newcomers to town who didn’t know any better nor have anything worth taking so they resorted to killing whoever they deemed ‘worthless’ which in this case happened to be the entire family except for one lone survivor - a young boy no older than twelve or thirteen who narrowly escaped death thanks to his hiding place underneath the bed where he was discovered days later after burning embers finally settled enough for him to crawl out from beneath it.

As terrifying as all of this sounded it didn’t deter me from returning home; not even close! I knew what needed to be done if I wanted peace and prosperity back in my homeland - I needed to get back home! But how? Even though it had been quite some time since I left I still remembered how dangerous Athens could be if you weren’t careful: getting kidnapped by pirates on your way out of port; mugged by thieves while walking through one of the slums; beat up by thugs because you looked like you might have something of value on your person... A thousand different ways you could end up dead or worse at any given moment if you weren’t prepared! The thought being killed by strangers scared me just as much as being chased down by loyal neighbors who took offense to some new merchant opening up shop nearby like grandfather did when he first started struggling to make ends meet dealing with competition across town but then again what choice did I have? Any longer away from Athens could mean disaster for me; not just professionally but also personally!

I needed help! So I went along towards one area where all the thieves hung around waiting for unsuspecting marks: near some ruins from ancient times that reminded people of better times long gone yet many claimed still held old spirits and ghosts lingering about causing mischief whenever possible which is why some believed these ruins would be haunted by evil spirits that protected those caves within its walls which is why people avoided going near them unless necessity demanded otherwise, like now... Because rumor had it that there lived an old hermit living within these ancient ruins rumored to do strange things involving magic which is why nobody dared approach him; although there were others who said he was simply mad and should be left alone because what was he going to do, curse someone? No one knows because no one has ever tried talking with him despite his cave's entrance being barely concealed behind overgrown vines while others said that's exactly why we shouldn't approach him - so that we don't catch whatever madness may plague him!

I wasn't sure what possessed me towards this decision but somehow found myself standing atop these ancient walls beside an opening leading into its depths where an old torch flickered desperately trying dismally against all odds at lighting up its surroundings while shadows danced upon its walls in tune with cackling voices whispering dark secrets only they knew about within this dark abyss seemingly designed purposely designed specifically only for those foolish enough to enter... As scary as all of this seemed though I felt myself beginning my descent into this unknown abyss until suddenly a voice whispered upon my shoulder: "You're making a mistake..." Spinning around quickly towards its source though nothing stood there except another torch further down this corridor whose flame danced urgently calling out towards me almost as if warning me against continuing deeper into this abyss's depths but still somehow compelled forward nonetheless through sheer willpower alone...

Standing before two tunnels leading deeper into these ruins I stopped unable to decide which way would lead me closer towards reaching my goal but then deep within my heart something stirred: A strong sense warning me against venturing further into whichever tunnel led further into these forbidden halls lest anyone foolish enough chose would suffer unspeakable consequences including whatever spirit might still linger here despite never having died here during whatever war brought about these ancient ruins once thriving with life in distant ages past... Suddenly awoken from whatever trance had taken hold over me though grateful not to be trapped forever within such cursed chambers either side called out towards me tempting my mind into believing something greater lay beyond each doorway: One like an open door ready to welcome me into blissful oblivion while another warned against entering any farther lest my sanity be forever lost within its slumbering depths... Still unable [to choose] between them both though like water trickling through an hourglass slowly downwards unable not only toward choosing between these two options but also remaining stuck halfway between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unable not only toward choosing between them both though like water trickling through an hourglass slowly downwards unable not only toward choosing between each option but also remaining stuck halfway between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unable not only toward choosing between each option but also remaining stuck halfway between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backward instead preferring instead staying right where I currently stood vacillating endlessly between each doorway unwilling or unable [to move] anywhere else forward or backwards" until exhaustion forced me out from within these ruins' oppressive presence leaving behind unanswered questions about whether anything actually lay ahead besides more haunting whispers warning one last time before abandoning me entirely leaving behind nothing behind but silence as if nothing there existed at all... So after emerging back out onto fresh air once again blinking away whatever dust may have clung onto me before stumbling tiredly onward deeper into town feeling certain whatever dangers may lie ahead wouldn't be nearly as bad as what horrors may lie amidst those cursed ruins lingering somewhere far behind...



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